Wednesday, October 9, 2019
Final Epilogue
Confession - I am only updating tonight because I made a promise to someone awhile back and I wanted to fulfill that promise here, too. So please meet DJ Nebulous again for the first time. I'm only sorry I cannot revise everything completely, but I hope this will prove helpful to you.
There is another person whose name has changed since this project wrapped up. I considered revising Kabuki Katze's references, but she insisted long ago it was fine to leave them. Be aware she now answers to Wandering Kotka and adjust your bookmarks accordingly.
I've gotta admit, looking through this site, there are dozens of other things I want to change or fix. But I won't. ROJ is in the past now, and I don't want to dwell too much on it anymore. It served its purpose, and it will always mean a lot to me. But I can't go back and I won't go back.
Therefore, please understand this site is now loaded with outdated references and broken links. That's in addition to any typographical errors or just bad writing that have slipped through the cracks. "Bad writing" ha ha, what? Anyway, there are no plans for further updates of any sort, so you're on your own from here with the site. It's also highly unlikely I'll be checking correspondence or comments regarding it in the future. The site will remain online as long as I have any say in the matter though.
However! I have occasionally been posting vintage ROJ material on my reincarnated OWARI blog. Feel free to check it out for nostalgia and maybe even some new insights.
Thank you, and goodbye.
Tuesday, July 28, 2015
Blue Skies Forever by Lewis Smith (2015)
If anyone is still following ROJ at this late date, you are probably stunned. Yes, this is a new update! No, this is not a sign of a grand revival. We are instead here to celebrate a milestone with an anniversary picture by series creator Lewis Smith.
2015 is the 20th anniversary of the creation of Return of Jetman. This had totally escaped my notice until Lewis posted this piece. It's a symbolic meeting of Jet Phoenix and the Gai Yuki incarnation of Black Condor. Amazingly, this is the first time Lewis has ever drawn Yuki!
Thank you, Lewis, for not only this picture and launching ROJ in the summer of 1995, but for entrusting your story and characters to me. As I have said, ROJ helped me find my own voice as a storyteller and gave me the confidence and ability to go out and explore my own worlds. I owe you a tremendous debt.
And thank you all for the memories.
Artwork © Lewis Smith. Originally posted July 9, 2015.
Jet Phoenix © Christopher Elam & Lewis Smith. Based on characters from CHOJIN SENTAI JETMAN (© TV Asahi/Toei/Toei Agency). Black Condor © TV Asahi/Toei/Toei Agency.
Tuesday, December 24, 2013
Owari
I used those words to kick off the introduction to my last fanzine, and they are fitting for today's post, too. Why? Because we have reached the conclusion of Return of Jetman.
The domain name for this site will be expiring on or around January 1st, 2014. Though there may be some temporary unavailability, the site will continue at the URL http://returnofjetman.blogspot.com. If you would like to keep tabs on ROJ, please make a note of this change and adjust your bookmarks accordingly.
With the completion of the annotations for each individual episode, we close the book on new material for this project. I won't swear that there will NEVER be new ROJ content, but there are no plans at this time. Keeping the site open is intended to maintain the archives online, but does allow us to return if inspiration strikes. However, to be clear: there are no new stories or art pieces in the works. There are no new commissions in the pipeline. We're not currently accepting submissions. This is "The End."
Friends, do not mourn because Return of Jetman is finished; instead, reflect on how much fun it was and look to the future. Your humble writer/webmaster/co-creator will continue to blog over at Christopher Elam's OWARI, which also serves as the central location for all of my various and sundry projects. I wouldn't bet against ROJ still coming up there from time to time.
Christopher Elam's OWARI - http://christopherelam.blogspot.com/
Meanwhile, original writer/primary artist/co-creator Lewis Smith continues the story of Kienan Ademetria at Gunmetal Black. His creativity and imagination are the main reason why ROJ became a thing far bigger for us than "just fanfiction." If you like ROJ, I encourage you to check out his other works!
Gunmetal Black - http://www.gunmetalblack.com/
I thank all of you who have made this project so rewarding over the years. ROJ began in 1995, which is mind-boggling to me sitting here today. In fact, I was just musing a few days ago that this is the first time in over a decade where I don't have something to write for ROJ. It has been a wild ride, and I will always look back on it fondly.
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Tuesday, December 17, 2013
New ROJ Episode 7 Notes
NEW RETURN OF JETMAN
"Just Imagine!"
(Episode 7)
Production Notes
by Christopher Elam
© 2013 Christopher Elam
New ROJ Episode 7 - "Just Imagine!" wrapped principal writing on July 27, 2010. The title is based on a house ad that ran in DC comic books touting JUSTICE LEAGUE OF AMERICA #1 with the tagline "Just Imagine!" The fact that it boasted that "[t]he mightiest heroes of our time...have banded together..." played a big role in my choice of it as a title.
Well, this is it - the final ROJ story. I still have mixed feelings about that, but this isn't the time to expand on them. Suffice to say, this was a marathon, not a sprint. This story contains some of what I would term disappointing results coupled with some of the best fiction I've ever written. Perhaps it couldn't have been any other way.
This story is dedicated to Paul "Igadevil" Sullivan. More than anyone else, "Iga" took an interest in the events of ROJ from the day he encountered it in 2002. Yes, even more than the author of the silly thing. His excitement for ROJ helped shape it, and likely buoyed me on the nights where tossing the whole deal out the window sounded like a grand idea. Thanks Iga, for being both a fan and a friend.
- As mentioned last time, I couldn't very well do a new ROJ series without finding a way to include Shinsei as Jet Phoenix. Only how? Having him wear a Neo-Jetman armor previously seen in NROJ Episode 1, that's how. Foreshadowing!
- The previous episode ended, you may recall, on a cliffhanger that had not been part of the plan. Fact is, having to split the Wyvern/Kienan sequence up into this finale worked out a lot better than what I'd originally had in mind.
- The bag of fake jewels was originally seen with the luckless Syrone in NROJ Episode 6.
- "Use it to make a giant hammer or something?" - Kienan doesn't take the conventions of sentai very seriously, does he?
- "What about Dirk?"/"Oh yeah, Dirk," - I am being totally serious here when I say this exchange was one of the primary reasons Dirk Dixon was named "Dirk," and it was also a key component of the story dating back to GUNMETAL BLACK/RETURN OF JETMAN! Though in all honesty, the speakers of each line were reversed at that point.
The origins of this particular inside joke date all the way back to the airings of G-FORCE on TV. Though I saw a ton of episodes, I somehow missed the one which delighted Lewis so much. In this series, Condor Joe was renamed "Dirk Daring" and one story ended with this exchange. I doubt it was supposed to be the end, but since those shows were edited a lot, it cut to credits as soon as "Oh yeah, Dirk," was uttered. So began a legend that was finally immortalized in NROJ.
- OK, you got me - Dirk Dixon was originally supposed to be shot dead by Kienan. That was kind of the point of him. But I developed an affection for the guy, and I don't think I was the only one. I decided somewhere in the writing of NROJ Ep. 6 that he would be spared, and set up a degree of redemption for the character.
- "I guess you make it a habit to leave your enemies alive so they can come back." - A callback to the revelation that Wyvern didn't kill Toranza when she had the opportunity in Ep. 14.
- Kienan accidentally calling Green Wyvern "Vertiga" is a reference to his meeting with that SEVEN SPHERES LEGEND character in the second "Crossover" story. It is also a meta-textual reference to the fact that Vertiga evolved out of Lewis' original version of Green Wyvern in the 1990s.
- Speaking of that Crossover, Kienan feeling sentimental when talking with Vain is implicitly the last vestiges of his memory of those events, and derives from her fate in that story. At Lewis' request, I tried to set up everything in such a way that these events would have no real bearing on the greater GMB continuity.
- Starman is the American name used for the Japanese superhero Supergiants (or Super Giant). "Kotetsu no Kyojin" ("Giant of Steel") is a nickname given to him in the Japanese films (akin to "Man of Steel"), while "Spaceman" was a name given to him in what I believe were European releases of his movies.
There were nine Supergiants featurettes produced by Shintoho. These films were edited into four movies sold to American TV : ATOMIC RULERS, INVADERS FROM SPACE, ATTACK FROM SPACE and EVIL BRAIN FROM OUTER SPACE. The description I gave of Starman is fairly accurate, though his color scheme varied from place to place and I had to pick one (the movies were B & W).
- The big reveal of Mr. Hoshi's true form as Starman is one of my proudest moments as a writer, as it came together exactly as I had envisioned it. That makes it even more frustrating to tell you that I have no idea why I decided to include him in NROJ. This isn't something that got lost in the intervening years either, as it was a decision that was made and then the build-up forgotten.
I can tell you why I wanted to include a mystery character. Jet Phoenix had been intended to be one in the original series, but I was left with the uncomfortable reality that it wouldn't be much of a mystery to the reader. I abandoned the notion early and left any "mystery" to the characters in the story.
So Mr. Hoshi was my attempt to do a "proper" mystery man. Only why did I pick Starman? The answer might be in the statement Jet Phoenix makes in the story - he was the first Japanese superhero, in the sense that we think of them today. That and the fact that he was pretty well-known could very well have been reason enough to use him, even though he was not part of the Toei pantheon.
Now, while I cannot recall exactly why I included Starman in the series, I can definitely tell you there are a number of clues planted along the way as far as his identity. The first is obviously the name "Mr. Hoshi", since "hoshi" is the Japanese word for "star." His initial appearance being in Hawaii (Ep. 2) was an allusion to the fact that I was basing him on the American incarnation of the character. Ryu having a small in globe in Ep. 5 was meant to evoke a similar signal device in the Starman films. In Ep. 6, the term "anachronism" and Mr. Hoshi's superlative fighting skills were there to remind readers subtly of the character.
- Sojiki Jigen was the villain in JETMAN Ep. 20, which introduced Shinsei's mate Michiru. She did almost die therein, so Shinsei's residual anger is understandable.
- After all the build-up and anticipation of Jet Phoenix returning to action, I thought it would be a nice swerve to have him decide he didn't miss the superhero life. This ties into another development later in the episode, so be patient!
- "Phoenix Finish!" is intended to be a modified version of the "Condor Finish" technique used by Black Condor in the JETMAN TV series.
- Chaos Chimera previously appeared in ROJ Ep. 11, where he (they?) was (were?) destroyed by the Jetman team.
- Tomato Dai O was the villain of JETMAN Ep. 46, and one of the few monsters in the series that was neither a Jigen-Ju or Bio Jigen-Ju. He was presented as Raita's childhood nightmare come to life, which is something this story gently pokes at just a bit.
- Yes yes, "Noooo, what a world!" is indeed a nod to THE WIZARD OF OZ.
- Jihanki Jigen was the monster of JETMAN Ep. 11, an episode where he scrambled the personalities of the heroes with the juice in his cans. Really.
- Noodle Jigen/God Ramen was the monster of JETMAN Ep. 10, and was indeed party to the creation of "Ako-chan Ramen" (illustrated with a cartoon version of the original Blue Swallow's alter ego). And yes, "Hola senorita!" is authentic dialogue from the creature. I don't get why it spoke Spanish either.
- Yoroi Snake first appeared in JETMAN Ep. 29. Choosing this particular monster for revival was not random, because it had relied on a human host. This gave me a vehicle to bring back...well, we'll discuss that a bit further down.
- I have no idea why referencing the Looney Tunes characters the Goofy Gophers (who are themselves probably a reference) seemed hilarious to me, but, well, here we are.
- The conceit of Message from Space action figures existing in the world of ROJ is something that tickled me so much that I had to include it. If you are unaware, MESSAGE was a 1978 Toei SF film very much in the mold of STAR WARS. Prince Hans (Shinichi "Sonny" Chiba), General Garuda (Vic Morrow), and Meia (Peggy Lee Brennan) are all actual characters in that film.
- Both Light Armadillo and the original version of Kage Jetman appeared in JETMAN Ep. 25.
Mika Katsuragi was meant to stay dead. She was created to die at the hands of Nemesis, to give gravity to his menace and to provide extra motivation for the heroes. What I hadn't anticipated was the character striking such a chord with readers despite having so little "screen time."
I gradually began to have second thoughts about Mika's demise, especially after it became apparent my sketchy ideas about the series' climactic battle would need to be reworked. As I began throwing around concepts, I realized her return would be a sufficiently interesting element to add to the proceedings.
The seeds for Mika's "comeback" were planted very subtly in Episode 6 with the acknowledgment of Yoroi Snake's presence. Since Yoroi Snake was a monster that needed a human host, it would follow that there had to be SOMEONE inside for him to exist.
- Yoroi Snake was defeated in the TV series by the destruction of the snake figurehead that served as the "brain" of the monster armor. The human host's glowing red eyes were also established in that episode.
- "Double Condor" is, naturally, a reference to both Ken Tendo and Jet Phoenix having worn the mantle of Black Condor.
- In reviving Mika, I did have the dilemma of how to break the spell over her. The moment where Black Condor changes to Ken Tendo is perhaps a bit obvious, but it felt suitably dramatic.
- Paira was the home planet of the starfish-looking aliens featured in the Daiei film WARNING FROM SPACE. Probably not coincidentally, similar aliens appear as part of the council in the Starman films. I just made the connection explicit.
- Prior to the decision to revive Mika, there was consideration of having an earlier, heroic incarnation of Nemesis manifest himself to fight Toranza Nemesis. Additionally, there would have been a group (designed by ROJ and Nemesis creator Lewis Smith) called Nemesis Sentai Nihilranger, which would have consisted of assorted versions of the villain. When we elected to deemphasize Nemesis for the final episode, these plans were scrapped.
- an earthquake of extraordinary magnitude - Gratuitous KENTUCKY FRIED MOVIE reference goes here.
- Inazumajin X was first and last seen in Episode 1. It was left in the background to make its reappearance that much more impressive.
- Sniper Cat got to be the last monster standing because he is a favorite of Lewis'. The "comically-large bandage" is one of those bits of visual humor common to tokusatsu, even in otherwise tense scenes.
- OK, OK, you got me: one of the main reasons for doing this series in the way in which it played out was to finally have a proper "team-up" between the old and new Jetman teams. The hows and whys weren't always defined, but it was a goal right from the start. However, Jet Phoenix switching to Black Condor gear in the middle of the battle was not something I had expected until it happened. Sometimes, you just go with the flow.
- The existence of Jet Icarus Mark II and Jet Icarus Mark III was a bit of confusion I created for myself, but it was done with the intention of filling out the final battle a bit (especially when Mark I was brought out of mothballs).
- Despite their being crucial to the narrative, I had to find a reasonable excuse to write both Starman and Mika out of the huge mecha battle. Whether my rationale made sense is for the reader to decide.
- Ken seamlessly giving orders, even to the senior Jetman team (including his parents), is one of those moments where he rises to command almost in spite of himself.
- Mjolner Hammer was previously seen in Episode 1, though it was not named as such. See why Kienan's offhand comment was noteworthy now?
- Kaori's extreme reaction compared to the other Jetmen is because she lost her son Gai due to Toranza (in case you had forgotten).
- Since I have been reluctant to kill off characters established in the TV series canon, I did not take the decision to have Green Wyvern slay Toranza lightly. It literally felt like the only logical conclusion to his arc. Having said that, there are...qualifications. More on that in a bit.
- Having Green Wyvern not only kill off Toranza, but pocket the Omniversal Prism too, was not entirely expected when I sat down to write this story. It did, however, provide a stark reminder that she has more of an "edge" than the rest of the heroes, and is capable of things they might never do.
There was some internal debate about having Mika Katsuragi (and the surviving Paradox Army members) die off When Toranza Nemesis did. This was ultimately tabled as a bit too much of a downer. But what to do with her?
The solution turned out to be in the first episode, and in certain things that occurred in this final episode. Mika had professed being a big fan of Jet Phoenix, and Shinsei had decided to end his superhero career for good. Why not have Mika be the NEW Jet Phoenix? It even fit thematically, since she had died and been resurrected. I sent her off into space as a new emissary of the High Council of the Emerald Planet, partially in tribute to the original plan for Green Wyvern at the conclusion of the first ROJ, and partially because it made sense.
- Restoring the powers of the original Jetman was actually long overdue, so the choice was made that they would retain their powers (not that I expect them to go off and do more heroing with them).
- Gekko Kamen ("Moonlight Mask"), Nanairo Kamen ("Spectrum Mask"), and Iron Sharp are all Earth-born Japanese superheroes of the 1950s. Gekko Kamen was the first TV superhero, and also starred in a series of movies for Toei. Nanairo Kamen was probably the most famous of Toei's early TV heroes, including a stint by Sonny Chiba in the role. Chiba also portrayed Iron Sharp in the feature film from "New Toei" that was dubbed into English as INVASION OF THE NEPTUNE MEN (where the hero was called "Space Chief").
When the decision was made to spare Dirk Dixon, it was not a foregone conclusion that we'd follow up on his return. It just proved to be too irresistible a temptation to take one more crack at the big galoot.
"Gayle Allen" is a hybrid of Dale Arden and Wilma Deering, while Dr. Zabor is a mash-up of Dr. Zarkov and Dr. Huer. Those are from FLASH GORDON and BUCK ROGERS, respectively. For the record, "Zabor" is a legitimate surname. Oh, and "King Pongo" is a nod to Ming the Merciless from Flash Gordon, too.
- When I realized Hellvira Spitfire had sort of become superfluous in Episode 6, I remembered the rivalry between her and Dirk. I figured a spot in Dirk's universe would be a good place for her, and tease future battles that may or may not ever be written.
- "Dr. Hirose" is named for Yutaka Hirose (aka Kazuhisa Hirose and Takumi Hirose), the actor who portrayed Toranza in the JETMAN TV series. FUN FACT: Yutaka Hirose has his own Wikipedia entry! It's true!
Toranza turning out to still be alive and catatonic despite clearly dying is an idea that dates back to NROJ's roots as "Gunmetal Black/Return of Jetman" back in 2004. Is it a bit of a cop out? Maybe. The ambiguity of it is what appealed to me as a writer, and it manages to preserve the character the way I "found him" while still maintaining a dramatic death scene. It may not work for everyone, but I stand by my choice.
For the record, I don't have a "right" explanation for how Toranza is still alive. I toss a few out in the narrative, and any one of those theories could be perfectly valid. I prefer to leave it mysterious and let the reader decide which reason given (if any!) sounds best to them.
- So, here's the thing about Kei Mizuno being somehow important to multiverse - there is no payoff, and I'm sorry. This actually was a bit of a key plot point in GMB/ROJ, but as the plot developed and changed, it sort of fell by the wayside. I wound up having to hand wave it a little, and I hope it makes at least a little sense. I just didn't want to leave this plot thread dangling entirely.
- Leaving the fate of Ken and Etsuko's relationship in question might also be a bit of a cheat, but the truth is I'm not sure how their relationship should evolve. I was perfectly content keeping them apart at the end of ROJ.
- "You'd think it's been five years!" - meta commentary much?
- The tease that Gohan and Reiko not only have the ability to return to the world of Kamen Rider Sigma, but may actually visit it, was a bit of a wink to how that sequence ended in the previous episode. Little did I know that Igadevil would vow to make it happen someday! Keep watching the skies!
- Considering how the unseen "new" Skyforce Supreme Council was the indirect cause of something of a mess, it only made sense to have them be replaced.
- The "Ken-bo" nickname was first revealed in Episode 4.
- "Never The End" was a suggestion by Igadevil to indicate that even though this story was over, the legacy would never die. I'm not sure how I feel about it now, but there you go.
Leaving the team together despite the completion of the story's mission was an unusual choice for sentai fanfiction. Upon reflecting on the questions raised in the series, it seemed like the logical decision. Unfortunately, it doesn't come across as an especially strong ending, and that ultimately falls on me.
Confession - I never had a strong ending for this series in mind. I had hoped one would find me along the way, but it didn't. So in spite of the fact that this ending grows naturally out of what has come before, it also feels a bit anti-climactic. Given what had preceded in this episode and the prior one, that's doubly disappointing.
I don't want to end these notes on a low note, but if you're going to take the praise, you need to take the blame, too. Putting NROJ together was a frustrating and maddening experience, but I would say it was ultimately positive and it taught me FAR MORE about both my craft and myself than ROJ did. You can't call something like that anything less than a success.
© Christopher Elam.
Monday, July 15, 2013
Jetman Micro Heroes by Stephen Shuey
(left-right) : Green Eagle (Jeff Kensaki), Blue Swallow (Ako Hayasaka), White Swan (Kaori Rokumeikan Tendo), Yellow Owl (Raita Oishi), Black Condor (Gai Yuki), Red Hawk (Ryu Tendo), Jet Phoenix (?), Red Hawk (Gai Tendo), Black Condor (Ken Tendo), Yellow Owl (Gohan Oishi), White Swan (Etsuko Oishi), Blue Swallow (Reiko Hayasaka), Green Wyvern (Kei Mizuno)
Artwork © Stephen Shuey.
Jet Phoenix & Green Wyvern © Christopher Elam & Lewis Smith. Based on characters from CHOJIN SENTAI JETMAN (© TV Asahi/Toei/Toei Agency).
Sunday, December 23, 2012
Hyperion Icarus by Lewis Smith (2012)
Hyperion Icarus is a combination of four of the Jetfighters that make up Jet Icarus, plus the standalone mech Victory Icarus. They weren't meant to combine, but I decided to see if I could make it work.--Lewis Smith
Artwork © Lewis Smith. Originally posted December 15, 2012.
Monday, December 17, 2012
New ROJ Episode 6 Notes
NEW RETURN OF JETMAN
"Beyond The Universe"
(Episode 6)
Production Notes
by Christopher Elam
© 2009-2012 Christopher Elam
New ROJ Episode 6 - "Beyond The Universe" wrapped principal writing on February 6, 2009. The title is based not on the Beatles song "Across The Universe," but rather one of the final lines of the original 1960s English dub of THE X FROM OUTER SPACE (Shochiku, 1967). Who says we don't know quality?
This is probably the single most ambitious ROJ story, and one of the keys to beginning the new series in the first place. It was born out of the various crossover projects proposed in 2002 and 2003. None of those (including the previously discussed GMB/ROJ) came to fruition, but elements of all of them found their way into New ROJ. This sixth episode is the culmination of the desire to do a crossover with other "universes."
The choices for Episode 6's crossovers were Lewis Smith's GUNMETAL BLACK (an obvious one, given the origins of New ROJ), Paul "Igadevil" Sullivan's KAMEN RIDER SIGMA, and Kabuki Katze's "Star Anise," an integral character in her shared universe. All of the individual creators greenlit this project, and each was involved in the participation of their characters. Every segment using outside characters was submitted to their creator for input and approval. As a result, there is a fair amount of material in this story that was ghost-written by other hands, or at least altered from its original draft.
This was the longest ROJ tale in some time, and also (to me) the most satisfying since the first series. I found the collaborative nature of this one to be inspiring, and it led me into interesting directions I hadn't conceived at the outset. Whether it is the best ROJ story is debatable, but it is definitely a memorable piece of work.
This story includes a special thanks to Sara Denny, who offered a considerable amount of help by reading the work-in-progress manuscript and making suggestions. Sara often didn't have the foggiest idea why certain things were going on in this story, but she came through with assistance like a champ. Thanks Sara!
- It is worth mentioning that all of the "parallel world" sequences tend to hit the ground running, with details filled in as we go. I preferred this method as opposed to weighing down the story with even more exposition.
- Kabuki says Star Anise Kaninchen was born from a pair of stockings she saw one day, as she felt the need to create a character that could wear them. Ms. Katze's favorite lagomorph is, in her words, "a vice cop with, er, a checkered past." I hint at this checkered past here and there in the story, but Star Anise presented a very different challenge than the other two crossovers - most of her universe still only exists in the concept stage. It was my job, if I chose to accept it, to flesh out these concepts for the first time in a full-fledged story. As you probably gathered, I did accept this task.
- Mosi Kolenya, the cat girl who is Star's school friend and owner of the Maneki Neko ("Lucky Cat") sushi bar, wasn't originally created as part of Star's universe. She was based on the selfsame Sara mentioned a few paragraphs ago, and I chose to co-opt this character to give Star someone close to her for a conversation. Calleigh Cohen, the named but unseen cohort of Star and Mosi, is another cat girl, this time based on Kabuki herself.
- The conceit of having Black Condor and White Swan getting arrested when they appeared in Star's universe was one attempt to add distinct elements to each individual crossover. All of the crossovers have certain parallels (some intentional, some not), so anything that made them stand out was a plus.
- Igadevil's Kamen Rider Sigma (a.k.a. Maya Ryusaki) debuted in Spring 2001. She has her roots in a lot of different influences, not all of them Kamen Rider, but that's a story for Iga to share on his own site...if he so chooses.
- Geier is the evil organization that is a constant thorn in the side of Sigma in her own series. They are roughly equivalent to the likes of Shocker, Gel-Shocker, Destron, et al.
- "Ginga Jo-O" ("Galaxy Queen") and "Shedondas" are a pair of characters created by Igadevil himself that he felt might not "fit" into the KAMEN RIDER SIGMA series, so he offered them to me for use. They are female versions of "Ginga O" and "Sadondas" from the 1980 film KAMEN RIDER: 8NIN RIDER TAI GINGA O ("Masked Rider: 8 Riders vs. the Galaxy King"), cast in the improbable but highly amusing roles as mates to the male villains. Well, as male as a very tall robot and a rubbery space dragon can be perceived as being.
- Many of the more oblique references made by Ginga Jo-O are, in fact, references to the 8 RIDERS movie. Ginga O's goal was to secure "Sigma Energy", which has ended up playing a role in the development of Sigma; Sky Rider was the chief Rider of the movie, thus ultimately responsible for Ginga O's defeat & demise; and "Izumi" was the female lead and the recipient of Ginga O's unwanted attention. Sigma's line about "...the plot to a movie I've never seen!" is a little meta-commentary on these references.
- Hellvira's usage of Pegasus as a steed is the first time she has used her ability to summon mythological beasts to do her bidding since NROJ Ep. 3. That aspect of her character was intended to play a more sizable part in this episode, but it wound up being downplayed during the writing process.
- It is revealed that Hellvira and Ginga Jo-O had an earlier encounter, though how long Hellvira has been in Sigma's universe is unknown.
- Ogouchi Dam is a reasonably significant landmark in Kamen Rider lore, as it was used as a setting in the very first episode of the original KAMEN RIDER. It also appears in the first episode of JINZO NINGEN KIKAIDER and other Japanese superhero shows. It was suggested by Iga when I asked for an important place in Rider history to use as a backdrop.
- Lewis Smith created Kienan Ademetria, the star of the GUNMETAL BLACK series, in 2000, and the character has so far appeared in 6 novels and a bunch of short stories. Kienan and his futuristic world have a long and colorful history that is way beyond the scope of these notes. You can read more about it at www.gunmetalblack.com.
- Captain Von Ondine owes his name to the Blue Öyster Cult song "M.E. 262," hence the reference to his being a "ME-262 space cruiser captain." That ME-262 space cruiser in question, the Black Telescope, derives its name from the BÖC song "Workshop of the Telescopes."
- By design, the precise reasons for Captain Von Ondine taking out a contract on Syrone are left undescribed. The details of Syrone's deed, and how he got his bag of "gems," are not important for this story's purposes. It's the sort of thing the reader can color in for themselves if they choose.
- For the eagle-eyed among you, Green Wyvern's arrival on the desert moon rather obviously picks up directly where we left her in the previous episode.
- The ship Silhouette, the fighter Nighthawk, and Kienan's support crew the Marionettes are essential elements of the GMB series. The Marionettes, Vain and Mirage, are artificial lifeforms that Kienan "liberated." They subsequently became his proteges.
- An earlier version of this second sequence with Shinsei & Mr. Hoshi was completed and later scrapped, with me essentially starting from scratch. Why? The first draft took place entirely on Jet Carrier, ending with our heroes preparing to land and enter Future City. The pacing just wasn't there, so I cut out the Jet Carrier stuff entirely and began with them already inside Future City. This meant I had to restructure some things, but I think this scene works far better as a result.
Michiru Oshima was originally intended to accompany the heroes into Nemesis' stronghold, which is why the last line of this sequence exists in the first place. In fact, Mr. Hoshi coming along with Shinsei & Michiru was a bit of a late addition. In the end, Michiru got left at Skywatch because it seemed way too illogical to drag her into that much danger.
- "Are you sure one of those other names of yours isn't 'Aya'?" - Another callback to Supreme Commander Odagiri, who talked Shinsei into doing several things he didn't want to do in the first ROJ series.
- Mr. Hoshi laying out the overall plot of this story, and the mechanics of the other sequences, turned out to be a crucial bit of exposition. After the stage was set in earlier scenes, he finally explains what has happened and what needs to happen for the benefit of Shinsei and the readers.
- Mr. Hoshi's long-awaited explanation of his origin gets cut off at the last possible moment, of course, so the wait can be prolonged until the final episode. He also reveals that he was the mystery meteorite spotted in Episode 1, which brought Funkyman into conflict with the Discotech Empire in the first place.
- "Welcome, my friend," Nemesis greeted. - Foreshadowing? Nah, it couldn't be!
- The Grinam and Garo, which I think are explained adequately in the story itself, were shoehorned into the episode to give a plausible point to break from the action. As I mentioned earlier, this sequence was originally intended to climax with our heroes about to enter Future City, so it needed it to go out with something punchier.
- Kabuki's concept of "Mixes" (human/animal hybrids bred for specific purposes) in her world was what led directly to the Silver Raven/kidnapping ring/genetic engineering plot. This plotline indicates that Silver Raven has been on Star's world for a fair amount of time prior to Ken and Etsuko's arrival, which is corroborated by the surprise appearance of the Prism. I decided to play fast and loose with the passage of time from world to world, as I didn't feel like I needed to hew to any set of rules when bending the laws of time and space.
- The term "gestalt clone" finally finds its way into a story, spoken by Etsuko. This leads to the phrase "egghead words," which is something that probably suits that character trait of hers quite well.
- "...since the raven symbolology is verboten nowadays." - In Kabuki's world, there has been a certain degree of unpleasantness involving human/raven Mixes. That's something I'll leave for her to explain when and if the time comes.
- The Soda Corporation Tower is a subtle tribute to Hirohisa Soda, the main writer for the vast majority of the 1980s sentai series, and possibly one of the key people in defining the sub-genre. If you don't know that "Soda" is a Japanese name, it sounds like a manufacturer of soft drinks. Either way works for me!
- "...any illegal kidnapping rings that were based there." - As opposed to the legal kind? This was an error which was left in the story because it sounded like the kind of thing Ken would say.
- I'd always intended that Star Anise have possession of the Omniversal Prism shard in her world, but the idea of it unknowingly being in her necklace simplified how she got it a great deal. As a bonus, it led to more fun innuendo between Star and Etsuko.
- "I mean, I don't think you're really speaking Japanese, anyway." - I tacked this onto Etsuko's reasoning on my time twisting as a reminder of one of the properties of the Prism established in Ep. 2, just so everyone realized that I wasn't intentionally glossing over the language barriers here or in the GMB scenes. It's the presence of the Prism that makes all the difference for everyone.
- Yes, Maya's hair is dyed magenta, and she lives in the back of a coffee shop. These are the kind of things you learn when you read www.igadevil.com!
- The "Kôhimame Café" ("Coffee Bean Café") is a key setting in the Sigma universe. Its owner, Junko Tama, is better known as the heroine of the series KAMEN RIDER V3 (1973-74).
- Mikoto Taki, Maya's friend and roomie, is the daughter of Kazuya Taki, an ally of the Double Riders in the original KAMEN RIDER series (1971-73). She has a mad crush on Kazuo Kanagawa, a police detective who is not seen in this tale and yet still manages to play an important part in it. She is aware that Maya is Sigma, as demonstrated later in this segment.
- Kohei Kurobe is, as explained within the story, a police detective and Maya's friend...and possibly more. They have a sometimes adversarial relationship, and the bit with him getting her name wrong (intentionally or not) is a recurring one at least in the early installments of the Sigma series. By this point in Sigma series continuity, he is also aware that Maya is Sigma, which figures into these scenes later.
- The "Shojo Rider" pendants are part of a scheme of Junko's to start a new junior Rider club. By the way, Junko's awareness (or lack thereof) of Maya's other identity is unknown as of this writing. However, the other characters assume she doesn't know.
- Pai Pai is a restaurant in Sigma's universe, named for the Shotaro Ishinomori-created TV series MAHO SHOJO CHUKANA PAI PAI.
- Reiko's simmering unrest with Gohan finally explodes in this sequence. I've been building to this moment since Ep. 2, so I hope it delivers with the force I intended.
- "...drinking sake inside the pyramid you had built on top of our house." - As ridiculous as this sounds, it is based on an anecdote quoted from Shotaro Ishinomori in Frederik L. Schodt's 1983 tome MANGA! MANGA! THE WORLD OF JAPANESE COMICS!
- "Wow, I think she might be colder than your sister," Kohei opined. - This line will make more sense when folks get better acquainted with Setsuko Ryusaki.
- "You know, like those 'super sentai' on TV?"/"Or Goranger and JAKQ?" - This exchange deserves a fuller explanation. It is based on the idea that, in Sigma's world, the original two sentai (the ones created by Ishinomori) might be "real," while the "super sentai" (the ones with the giant robots) are just for TV. As hard as it may be to believe, Toei actually attempted to make a distinction between "sentai" and "super sentai" for years, for reasons of their own.
I hedged my bets with the phrasing of this, to give Igadevil some wiggle room if he decides his world is, in fact, a "Rider only" world. Also of note - this is the first time authentic Toei sentai besides Jetman have been namechecked in ROJ. There are a number of allusions to them, but I've always left it at that. In fact, this episode is also the first time that the phrase "Kamen Rider" has been used!
- Dirk's "Radio Helmet" is a piece of gimmickry I've been dying to include in a story. At last, its time has come!
- "Killer Kienan" is a name based on the character of Killer Kane from BUCK ROGERS. For perhaps obvious reasons, the idea of Kienan recast as a stereotypical movie serial type villain tickles me. It's something that probably wouldn't fly in a story, but as a gag, it's unbeatable.
- Kienan has encountered Nemesis twice before, in "Crossover" stories written by their creator Lewis Smith. The first was discussed in New ROJ Ep. 1's notes. The second, begun in 2006 and completed in 2008, has not yet been released to the best of my knowledge - at least as of this writing. Since both stories involve plenty of time travel, I am playing fast and loose with the order in which they might occur in Kienan's life.
- "What's your name? Ronin 3? Roninette?" - Ronin is another of Lewis' characters, and he was involved in both Crossover stories. In fact, his father (also named Ronin) was involved in the second one as well.
- "Great," the assassin replied as he pulled out a second gun. "Let's find out if he's bulletproof." - I just want to mention how proud I am of this line, as it is probably the best Kienan line I devised on my own.
- Dirk Dixon getting the chunk of Prism long enough to "wish" Nemesis into the GMB world (thus explaining his disappearance from Future City) solved the problem of explaining why Nemesis went from the main ROJ reality to this one a lot more neatly than I would have expected.
- "I know who you are!" he exclaimed to the unflappable Mr. Hoshi. "But...I thought you were dead!" - Well, Shinsei has deduced Mr. Hoshi's true identity, or so it seems. Have you? The last line is a hoary one, true, but it was fun to include it.
- The name "Jetman Revenge Squad" is derived from the Superman Revenge Squad which bedeviled Superman in the 1960s. The premise is that of "reconstructed kaijin", which has found frequent usage in Japanese superhero movies and special videos. They're usually bigger pushovers than they were the first go-round, no matter how much lip service is paid to their being stronger. I'll be playing around with this idea as I go.
- Nine of the members of the Jetman Revenge Squad are from the JETMAN TV series. Noodle Jigen, Jihanki (Vending Machine) Jigen, Camera Jigen, and Sojiki (Vacuum Cleaner) Jigen are all Jigen Ju ("Dimension Beasts"). Light Armadillo, Ari (Ant) Bazooka , Yoroi (Armor) Snake, and Sniper Cat, on the other hand, are Bio Jigen Ju ("Bio Dimension Beasts"). Tomato Dai O ("Great Tomato King") is a bit of an oddball in that he doesn't fit into either category! He's his own monster, if you will.
- Zaigan, Bango, and Damaru are all villains who appeared in the 3-D short SUPER SENTAI WORLD, which united the teams of Fiveman, Jetman, Zyuranger, Dairanger, and Kakuranger. There are questions in some circles about how SUPER SENTAI WORLD "fits," but I rarely let pesky little matters like stuff making sense affect how I deal with my take on continuity.
- Kumoden, Saikong, Shishigone, and Kotetsumori are all Chaos Beasts, from the first half of ROJ. Saikong and Shishigone were mentioned in Ep. 6, and the former debuted in Ep. 7 alongside Kumoden. Shishigone's fate was discussed in Ep. 8, but he was never actually seen in action. Kotetsumori (kotetsu - "steel" + komori - "bat") is a brand new monster created specifically for New ROJ, though we can assume he fought Jetman during the interim between Episodes 7 and 8.
- Chaos Chimera, Chaos Fenris, Chaos Talos, and Chaos Cyclops are Chaos Myth Beasts, from the second half of ROJ. Interestingly, only Chaos Chimera appeared in an earlier story (Ep. 11, to be exact). The others are all new, and presumably fit into the gap between Episodes 12 and 13. Chaos Fenris is based on the Fenris wolf of Norse mythology, Chaos Talos comes from the bronze giant Talos of Greek mythology, and Chaos Cyclops originates from the one-eyed giants dubbed "Cyclops" in Greek myths.
- My original idea for the scenes with Ken and Etsuko in action was that they would have to be sans costumes because of the taboo against them on Star Anise's world. This was fantastic in concept, but lousy to attempt to maintain throughout the rest of the story. In the end, I gave up on it. I did weave the "out of costume" bit into the narrative, and I'm happy about that.
- Star Anise's codename "Usagi" is the Japanese word for "rabbit." In a happy coincidence that I am sure delighted Kabuki, Usagi is also the civilian name of SAILOR MOON. Etsuko's codename "Cygnus" is from the genus name for swans (from the Latin for swan).
- The wishing thing for the Prism rears its head again in Star Anise's mad dash. The accidental usage of the Prism in this manner by her and Dirk Dixon is meant to emphasize how potentially dangerous it could be. Her teleportation scene might owe a debt to the Toho movie ESPY (what, again?), but this was not my conscious intent.
- "This thing between us has been going on for awhile, and...well, I've never had anything good happen to me on a parallel world." - There was a feeling on my part that, even though I had been building Reiko's heartache since Episode 2, she might come across too harshly in this story. I'm still not sure that she doesn't, but I deliberately made an effort to soften her a little in the scene with Maya. Her reference to parallel worlds is a callback to a particular sequence in ROJ Ep. 5.
- The "problems" between Maya and Kohei refers to some Kamen Rider Sigma plot points still in the future as of this writing.
- The Ginga Jo-O/Hellvira duel was, obviously, not always going to be so one-sided. I decided to take this approach because it was unexpected, and I found that I had accomplished most of what I wanted with Hellvira. Ginga Jo-O presented a new and different threat, and I wanted to get as much mileage as I could out of her.
- Hellvira's threat to call forth Cerberus (the three-headed dog guardian of Hades in Greek mythology) was a touch I added because that was part of my original plan back in 2005, when she was envisioned as the only villain in the ROJ/Sigma crossover sequences.
- Nemesis' revelation to Dirk Dixon was a bit of a surprise even to me, but it made sense given the context. It allows for a bit of a rehabilitation of Dirk's character without violating the inherent nonsense of him.
- The flying sled was something Lewis added to the GMB/ROJ picture he did, and it seemed only right to incorporate it into this story. Lewis also coined the name "Chronolancer" for Nemesis's javelin in the second of his Crossover tales. When set to erase someone from history, it is the "Chronodeleter." Remember that name.
- Nemesis telling Kienan that he has "mistaken [him] for someone else" and the subsequent explanation he offers is one of the keys of the entire series. A conceit I held, which I did not reveal to anyone, was that the Nemesis who appeared in the opening scene was the "real" one, and the one who was running around through the rest of the series (including all subsequent scenes in Ep. 1) was an usurper. And that usurper turns out to be...
Toranza! When last seen, Green Wyvern had severely injured him and reduced him to a vegetative state again in ROJ Ep. 14. The phrase "my superior intellect is unbeatable once stimulated" implies that the "real" Nemesis restored him, but quickly found himself in over his head in dealing with Toranza. As to whether Nemesis really intended him to be an "underling" or wanted to test his mettle in preparing for Green Wyvern is an open question that only Nemesis himself could answer.
Green Wyvern's importance to the multiverse is another of Nemesis' ideas that will possibly never be answered in full, but it will be a factor in the next episode. As for the "true" Nemesis (or his alternate doubles), Toranza's statement that "that fool is off deleting himself from reality" is another reference to Lewis' second Crossover story. He will not be back, in ROJ or anywhere else.
- I'll be honest - Zaigan, Bango, and Damaru go down fast and easy because there is so little to draw on for them. Their only appearance is from a "movie" that runs less than 10 minutes! While it was fun to put them in the story, I figured they'd also be the first to fall given how little stamina they had in their on-screen debut. I suppose I could have expanded their roles, but I'd rather do that with either well-established monsters or original creations.
- Sniper Cat and Ari Bazooka's unusual speech patterns were a lot of fun, and born from a desire to give distinctive "voices" to some of the monsters. Sniper Cat stretching his m's was inspired by KAMEN RIDER V3's enemy Doctor G, who always referred to his opponent as "Kamen Riiiiiiiiider V3"! Ari Bazooka's *tik*, on the other hand, was pulled from the character of Bug from Marvel Comics' old comic series based on THE MICRONAUTS.
- Mr. Hoshi carrying the Cross Changer was a role he inherited from Michiru when she was written out of the latter parts of the story. In many respects, it works better, as he could conceivably smuggle it into the lair undetected. At least, based on his actions, it's not out of the realm of possibility. And the Cross Changer leads us to...
Jet Phoenix! C'mon, how could I write this series without finding a way for Shinsei to resume his old identity? The explanation for how this is possible (yes, there is an explanation) will wait until the next episode, but I felt his reappearance was a fine note on which to send out the travails of Shinsei Hinotori and Mr. Hoshi for this story.
- Ken's rage at the plight of the children being exploited was difficult to get just so, since the sequence needed to be properly horrifying without violating the overall tone of the NROJ series. I'll let others judge my results. The death of Mika Katsuragi in Episode 1 continues to resonate with Ken, and that added a certain poignancy to his reaction.
- The possible return of a Ken/Etsuko romance was first hinted in Episode 4.
- I wonder if perhaps I was too subtle in my implication that Silver Raven's motive for fleeing the Soda Tower was primarily cowardice. I felt that it would be quite deflating for someone like him to finally get beaten (as he was in the previous episode) and that might make him lose his nerve a little. It does justify the nature of his scheme beyond just villainy, doesn't it? That kind of thing was a low risk proposition for someone with badly- shaken confidence. He can still talk a good game, but his true effectiveness has been compromised.
- In a related vein to the prior point, Star Anise's triumph was planned almost from the initial conception of this crossover. I wasn't sure what the precise nature of their conflict would be, nor the exact outcome, but I wanted it to be her that won out over Silver Raven.
- "But you two can take this. Too much temptation. If I did keep it, I'd probably be eating free pizzas every night." - It was a given that Star wouldn't keep her special necklace, but the business about "free pizza" was a quip Kabuki made in an e-mail that I decided to shamelessly incorporate into the narrative.
- Reiko and Gohan's poor showing due to their minds being on other things was an artistic choice, and maybe not the right one. They do ultimately get overshadowed in their own team-up as a result! My feeling was that they still have the final episode to redeem themselves in the eyes of readers, whereas this is the climax for the SIGMA cast in ROJ.
- Ginga Jo-O's "PARALYZING LIGHTNING STORM ATTACK!" is due to the power of the Prism, if I didn't clarify that adequately. It was not part of any early plans, but became a writing session spur-of-the-moment inclusion.
- Kohei's significant role, and involvement in this crossover's climax, is due to the fact that Igadevil said I "wrote a good Kohei!" Wow, thanks Iga! His tricking of Mikoto by invoking Kanagawa's name was one of those beautiful throwaway bits that only grew out of the story's development, and it ended up being one of my favorite moments in the tale.
One thing I tried to make abundantly clear about Kohei was that, despite appearances as a bumbler, he knows what he's doing. His shooting the Prism out of Ginga Jo-O's hand wasn't an accident or luck. It was his plan.
- When he offered Ginga Jo-O to me, Igadevil's primary request was that if I killed her, that she at least meet "an ironic end." I think Shedondas landing on her head qualifies!
- Maya's reaction to Gohan and Reiko's departure is interesting, in that she seems to be in denial over the fact that they need to leave. This was an outgrowth of a conversation Igadevil and I had one night regarding her character. It certainly adds a different spin in comparison to Star Anise, who advised Ken and Etsuko that they should make tracks.
- The subtle show of affection between Maya and Kohei was something both Igadevil and I wanted to get right in this tale. As you may have noticed, they tend to bicker a lot, so it needed to be significant and it needed to be obvious to the reader that they do really care about each other. The nature of it was inspired by, of all things, the final episode of the sentai series TURBORANGER.
- "It encourages the child within me." - This line, courtesy of Lewis, is a callback to Toranza's origins as the child "Toran" in the original JETMAN series.
- "Others left me broken but alive, and they all learned to regret that choice." - True! Besides Green Wyvern, both Radeige (in the TV series) and Lord Xenotos (in ROJ) left Toranza alive when they could have let him die. Neither of those villains fared very well afterward.
- The robot Veronika (loosely based on its namesake from the JETMAN series) previously appeared in a dream sequence in ROJ Ep. 9. It was implied, though never explicitly stated, that this robot was part of Toranza's secret scheme that was foiled in ROJ Ep. 8. As for how it can reappear if it was only ever completed in a dream sequence, well, I'll get to that in a moment.
- "Already I took your father from you, and that simpering boyfriend as well!" - Toranza revealed in ROJ Ep. 4 that he (as Toran) murdered Green Wyvern's father during the attack on the original Earthship. His claim of responsibility for Gai Tendo's death in ROJ Ep. 8 is accurate, but it didn't go quite so well for Toranza either.
- "Once again...it's time for the super thing!" - Another great line from Lewis, which refers back to ROJ Ep. 9's dream sequence. I leave it unstated in the story itself, but this would seem to indicate that Toranza is either using his newfound powers to tap into Green Wyvern's psyche OR he was somehow partially responsible for the original nightmare. I'll let you decide which explanation you prefer!
- During the editing process, I dropped a line for Kienan that I still think is pretty good. After the appearance of Veronika, he said, "I'm starting to miss the other guy."
- The "Old" God Wyvern is unquestionably a wacky idea. I first developed it when I was toying with the (since abandoned) concept that GMB and ROJ occupied the same "universe." I thought Old God Wyvern no longer fit after this conceit was left on the cutting room floor, but Lewis felt really strongly that it should be included for its incredible novelty value. So, thanks to his cajoling and some agile justification, I found a spot for it.
- Kienan's insane leap was part of this story all the way back to its GMB/ROJ roots, but Old God Wyvern suddenly made it (slightly) more logical. The Midare-Giri knife, won by Kienan in an underground fighting tournament of the same name, is an ancient unbreakable weapon forged by a now-dead alien race. It is Kienan's most prized possession.
- According to www.gunmetalblack.com, Nagra bullets are bullets "with gravity-well tips. An impact from one of these bullets has been known to blow basketball-sized holes in men and machinery."
- The interesting thing about the climax of this story is that it originally didn't exist! It was only as I was blocking out the entirety of this tale that I realized the GMB portion would need some extra room. However, the episode still needed a suitable cliffhanger. This led to the creation of the ending as it currently exists. For something that is actually a bit makeshift, I think it works pretty well, and leads you naturally into the concluding installment of this long-running series.
© Christopher Elam.
Sunday, November 18, 2012
10 Years of Return of Jetman Online
My reaction to this is, "Where did the time go?" Frankly, it seems like just yesterday that I was trying to figure out how to upload these things to my ISP webspace. ROJ was one of my first opportunities to carve out my own Internet identity, rather just contributing to things maintained by others. I like to think it holds up reasonably well, even if it sometimes (many times) wears my growing pains as a creator on its sleeve.
Though the ROJ stories concluded in 2010, the site will continue. I still have bits and pieces that I would like to finish, even if the actual demand for them is minimal. Beyond that, I want to preserve the contributions made by everyone to this modest little enterprise. I am proud to not only showcase my own work, but work by many other folks I respect a great deal.
No acknowledgment of ROJ's legacy would be complete without the name of Lewis Smith. Lewis was the guy who created ROJ and formed the basis for everything I subsequently did with the project. He graciously gave his blessing for me to not only continue where he left off, but steer things in my own direction. In a very real sense, I owe pretty much every piece of fiction I've written since then to his generosity. Thank you, Lewis.
And thank you all, both contributors and readers. I don't think ROJ would still exist as a destination in 2012 if it weren't for the enthusiasm you folks have shown. It has at times outstripped even my own, and that blows my mind. It is not a part of my daily thought process like it was back in its heyday, but ROJ laid the foundation for a lot of things I do. If that's not a valuable learning experience, I'm not sure what would be.
Saturday, September 15, 2012
New ROJ Episode 5 Notes
NEW RETURN OF JETMAN
"Five Against Infinity"
(Episode 5)
Production Notes
by Christopher Elam
© 2008-2012 Christopher Elam
New ROJ Episode 5 - "Five Against Infinity" wrapped principal writing on June 6, 2008. By this point, the delays in getting episodes completed and posted reached a near-comical level, so I won't even mention precisely how long this one took. Long enough, that's for sure.
This particular episode was one that worried me for a long time as possibly not being up to par. While it still has its weaknesses, I tend to feel I managed to whip it into reasonable shape. It contains a couple of sequences that are among my favorites in the entire ROJ canon.
- The appearance of Okayama is a nod to the Toho film FRANKENSTEIN CONQUERS THE WORLD (1965), in which that area was one of the locations mentioned by name.
- The gathering of the original Jetman members (minus Shinsei Hinotori/"Gai Yuki") in a significant dialogue scene is something that had been a long time in coming. In fact, neither Raita Oishi nor Kaori Tendo had spoken a line of dialogue since ROJ Ep. 2! That story was also where the characters lost their powers, as is mentioned later.
- "We've been terribly worried, especially after what happened to you, Ako." - This line, and several subsequent lines in this sequence, are callbacks to New ROJ Ep. 4's plot point of Jeff Kensaki/Jetman Killer kidnapping Ako.
- The removal of shoes and donning of slippers before entering a house is a Japanese custom that I (surprisingly) hadn't really acknowledged previously.
- Ryu's ominous statements tie in with what he has apparently learned from Mr. Hoshi, whom he met at the conclusion of New ROJ Ep. 3. No more details will be forthcoming in this installment, but I will say cryptically that there are hints sprinkled throughout regarding both the full nature of Nemesis' plan and the mystery of Mr. Hoshi.
- The "Jetman poker game," complete with idiosyncratic twists (cocktail swords?), was one of the very first new concepts I developed for New Return of Jetman back in 2005.
- "Think long, think wrong" was an admonition I first learned from my father regarding playing pool.
- The very first time we meet Gai Yuki in JETMAN Ep. 2 (discounting his cameo in the first episode, natch), he's playing cards - and cheating to boot!
- The sequence with Gohan, Reiko, and Reiko's double was another scene born early in the development process, but the emotions behind it evolved from that initial germ of an idea. I credit the influence of a good friend in shaping how it plays out. The concept is a logical outgrowth of the simmering tension and Reiko's power, but it's still not something that I think a lot of people would expect.
- As originally conceived, the Gohan/Reiko interlude would have included a flashback of the new Jetman interacting as young children. This was a fascinating idea, but it proved unworkable in execution for several reasons and was scrapped.
- One of the interesting things in the development of the Paradox Army was no real consideration was given as to how they might get along with one another. As has been mentioned before, both Dirk and Hellvira were created as essentially ciphers for the original GMB/ROJ project, while Silver Raven was a latecomer who replaced Grey Shrike in the lineup. Because of the nature of the stories, the nuances of each of their personalities came about independently. This was why it was so pleasantly surprising that having them in the same room was the source of much scene-stealing joy. It wasn't something I could have predicted, but it makes for an exciting dynamic among the minions.
- The Jet Copters are my homage to Batman's Whirly Bat vehicle. I have no idea why I found this so appealing.
- Nemesis' magnificent complex is named Future City because Lewis informed me that this was the name of one of the character's bases back when he was an armored super guy. I liked the name so much that I figured I could get some mileage out of it. Something like my version of Future City probably couldn't exist in the real Jigoku-dani, but between the Omniversal Prism and literary license, I think I'm allowed to go stray from reality.
- "A suspension bridge?" - Yes, a suspension bridge. Another reason for the Prism remodeling the area. Suspension bridges as the setting for Japanese superhero battles are almost disturbingly common. A good example would be the BIOMAN film which I have referenced in the past.
- During the editing process, there was one truly unfortunate continuity error that cropped up because of the lengthy writing time for this story. Namely, the heroes never transformed on-screen! They went from being in their civilian identities to Jetman without explanation. One hasty rewrite to a portion of a scene later, this somewhat glaring gaffe was fixed.
- Good ol' 6-Yark-6. His presence adds nothing to the story except an incidental weird element. But then, isn't that enough? He was a villainous counterpart to 7-Zark-7 that I created for my BATTLE OF THE PLANETS fan stories when I was 12 years old. Those of you who've been reading for awhile may recall that that same BOTP material also featured the character who inspired the creation of Green Wyvern.
- It is worth noting mainly because of the way it points out how random things get incorporated into the narrative for no good reason, but the monorail came about because I had been reading about Micronauts toys at the same time I was writing that portion of the story. And you see, the Micronauts line had a monorail and...
- "I dirtied Seven Force's pristine finish for nothing!" - As I do not believe it has been covered already, this line seems to be a good opportunity to mention that Silver Raven's "neat freak" tendencies were derived from an offhand suggestion by the peerless Igadevil. Too bad the poor guy doesn't even remember that anymore.
- Jetman's helmet cams were an element from the TV series that would pop up every now and then. One of the more fascinating aspects was that there were individual screens for each member, and they would also occasionally display their real faces during battle. It was a nice method of giving the lead actors face time while their stunt doubles did the dirty work.
- Michiru's arrival and the resurfacing of Shinsei's self-doubts gave me the chance to explore their relationship just a little. I'm honestly not completely happy with the result, but I think it's at least a solid OK.
- "It's teleportation," Raven deadpanned. "It's nothing new." - This particular line is an homage to the English dubbing of Toho's 1974 film ESPY, a movie that I dearly love for reasons I cannot quite explain.
- After the opening sequence, I would imagine most readers have gathered there is more to the original Jetman's "death" than is made explicit in the story. Still, it does add some tension and (hopefully) mystery. The revelation also gave me the chance to incorporate an off-screen cameo by Aya Odagiri.
- The term "car hire" is not used as often in the United States, but that is precisely why I chose it.
- The inclusion of a robot battle in this story was very much up in the air for quite some time. I ended up feeling the tale needed the extra "oomph" such a sequence might provide. Plus, it did allow us to revisit Seven Force's Robo Mode, for what may be the last time. But I am getting slightly ahead of myself.
- "Septua Shock", formed from the Latin septua ("seven") was one of my more creative attempts at incorporating "seven" terms into the arsenal of Silver Raven's mecha.
- The "flux capacitor" business was a bit of whimsy where I decided to tweak myself for the rampant pseudo-scientific jargon that overflows these stories. I make no apologies, because I love that nonsense. The crazy part is that it's NOT an intentional reference to BACK TO THE FUTURE. Honest!
- The brief return of the Succubus Girls was a last minute addition to the climactic skirmish.
- As originally plotted, Black Condor intentionally shattered the Omniversal Prism. I wasn't happy with this when it came time to commit the story to record, because it implied (quite rightly!) that Ken was more than just a little reckless in his handling of the situation. As written, he's still perhaps a shade unwise, but it's a lot more understandable under the circumstances.
- "What the fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu..." - This parting shot from Green Wyvern is rather juvenile, yes, but also perfectly in character.
- The closing with Nemesis is meant mainly to give a true sense of the gravity of the situation. If the mastermind of everything (as implied in the opening) has been caught off-guard, well, what can we expect?
Only perhaps the strangest ROJ story of all, that's all.
© Christopher Elam.
Tuesday, June 5, 2012
New ROJ Episode 4 Notes
NEW RETURN OF JETMAN
"Parallel"
(Episode 4)
Production Notes
by Christopher Elam
© 2007-2012 Christopher Elam
New ROJ Episode 4 - "Parallel" was begun in September 2006, and wrapped principal writing on May 15, 2007. And what took so long this time? Well, I had a fire in my home and ended up being displaced for several weeks. Add in the clean-up, repairs, etc., and there was very little time to devote to ROJ for a couple of months.
I'm actually ridiculously proud of how this story came out. It delves a bit more deeply into both the Jetman mythos and the idea of the multiverse. Plus, we see the early culmination of a subtle subplot that has been running through the New ROJ narrative. Throw in some of my more effective action sequences, and this story was extremely satisfying for me.
This story is dedicated to the young woman who uses "Kabuki Katze" as her nom de Internet. I do know her real name, but I choose not to reveal it here. She has been a big supporter of ROJ since we first crossed paths, and her advice and inspiration played a major role in the development of this story. Thanks, Kabuki!
- Jeff Kensaki is an actual JETMAN character - sorta. He was created for the Jetman manga series that was originally serialized in B-CLUB. In the manga, he was a popular rock star who gained Birdonic powers and fought side-by-side with the original Jetman as the new fifth member "Green Eagle". He also kindled a very weird romance with Ako Hayasaka/Blue Swallow along the way. He is not considered part of the official JETMAN canon, no matter what some online sources claim.
There was actually no way to tie the manga Jetman stories in with ROJ directly, even if we'd wanted to do such a thing. The two stories were created completely independently of each other, and contradict each other on several key points. Plus, just about every aspect of Jeff in that story reeks of "Mary Sue" Syndrome. Still, there was an urge to acknowledge the manga's version of the future.
The answer came when my pal "Igadevil" suggested that Silver Raven (more on him in a bit) needed at least a sidekick, if he wasn't going to have henchmen. I jokingly tossed out "Silver Raven & Jeff", a reference to the short-lived variety series PINK LADY AND JEFF. When I realized that "Jeff" was the name of Green Eagle, well, that set the wheels in motion. I re-imagined Jeff Kensaki as he might be in a world where all the breaks didn't go his way - until he gained powers belatedly and learned of his much better other life. And lo, Jetman Killer (a name he gives himself later in the story, directly inspired by Ace Killer from ULTRAMAN ACE) was born. The Jetman Killer character includes many incidental details, allusions, and even bits of dialogue drawn from his manga inspiration.
- The Ken/Etsuko relationship takes another turn down a strange road. I actually didn't know this scene was going to play out quite this way until I sat down to write it. Yes, it's true - sometimes the characters really do write things themselves.
I should also point out that the references to poor li'l Mika (New ROJ Ep.1) and Kei's insomnia (a recurring point in ROJ, first mentioned blatantly in Ep. 6) were also not part of the original plan for this scene, but were added in to flesh it out further and give a little more motivation to the various goings-on.
- Ako Hayasaka is, of course, the original Blue Swallow from JETMAN, and the mother of Reiko. One of my greatest regrets from ROJ was that I never found a good way to bring the original team more into the proceedings. The plot of her being kidnapped was first proposed as part of a team-up story that never got past the talking stage. It has been altered a great deal since that time - in fact, the character that was supposed to kidnap her in that version was the guy who evolved into "Duke Disco"! As we saw in New ROJ Ep. 1, he's not able to fill that role now even if I wanted him for it.
- "Saburo Iketani" was the name of an actual Japanese newscaster who made numerous cameo appearances in Japanese science-fiction films, beginning with the original Godzilla film in 1954
- "D. Jigen" is not a real Japanese name, as you may or may not notice. It is actually short for "Dryer Jigen", a Byram monster from JETMAN episode 28 who was not especially good at being evil and ended up reforming. When last seen at the end of that episode, he was working as an apprentice in a barber shop. Because, you see, he's a hair dryer monster.
- The Tokyo Dome and Korakuen Amusement Park are, in fact, relatively near one another. This point is driven home by the commercials for Korakuen's superhero stage shows that are filmed by the "Egg Dome". I went to great pains to research the placement of various landmarks in the park and even the names of some of them. It doesn't add anything to your enjoyment of the story, but it makes me happy if I'm reasonably accurate with little details like that.
- The (approximate) translation to Jeff's song is as follows :
When the past becomes the future
Claws of evil draw near
We are the warriors of the great sky
Five brave young people
OUR TIME IS NOW!
Not even good by sentai song standards, is it?
- The term "rainbow heads" was an insult tossed about on the comedy English dub of DYNAMAN that aired on NIGHT FLIGHT.
- "Hayasaka Mama-sama" is a very unusual honorific for a very unusual situation. What would a Japanese man call his mother-in-law if he had previously idolized her? There's no real easy answer for that question. It's a strange sort of compromise, and exactly the sort of thing you might expect from Gohan (who still lacks some of the social graces).
- "Cosmic Beartrap" is a rather obvious piece of pseudo-scientific technobabble, and a complete throwaway bit. I only put it in there because it makes me smile every time I read it.
- Silver Raven was not originally the third member of the Paradox Army. That honor was first conceived as going to Grey Shrike. Yes, Grey Shrike - the "evil" Etsuko (though not really) from ROJ Ep. 12. This Grey Shrike, however, would have really been Etsuko Oishi - from a parallel universe where she had turned rogue and murdered her teammates. Her image at the end of New ROJ Ep. 1 coupled with the real Etsuko's disappearance would have created some interesting conflicts.
Upon further consideration, I felt the evil Etsuko angle was just too much melodrama for what I wanted to do. It upped the emotional stakes to an almost unbearable level, and that torpedoed the chance for any fun at all afterward. So, Silver Raven was created and given a somewhat different (though similar) origin. Honestly, I think this worked out for the best, because Silver Raven developed his own distinctive personality, and turned out to be quite sinister in his own right.
The idea of Silver Raven being a "gestalt clone" (as I phrased it everywhere but the story - next time) was possibly born from the RED DWARF episode "Legion". It's certainly one of the few times that something like this has been made an actual part of a character, at least in the sentai genre.
- "I was supposed to be the green member!" - As noted above, technically true! In the manga, Kensaki becomes "Green Eagle", who was the new fifth member of the original Jetman team
- The mystery of Mr. Hoshi deepens, as he plays Captain Exposition for Ken and pretty blatantly demonstrates that there is more to him than meets the eye. There can be little doubt now that Mr. Hoshi is not just some random stranger, but someone involved in this matter far more deeply than he is telling.
- OK, the thing with the merry-go-round horse? That is one of my favorite fight scene bits ever. I don't know if anyone has ever done that in a real program, but I would love them forever if they did.
- The reference to a "Chinese Jetman" called Fighter Man that is based in Taiwan is a double-sided inside joke. On the one hand, it is a homage to the "Super Riders" movies - Kamen Rider films that were produced in Taiwan with a mixture of stock footage and new scenes. On the other hand, "Fighter Man" was the name of bootleg Jetman action figures that surfaced during the initial Power Rangers toy craze in the 1990s. Anybody out there have any of these rarities?
- The Wyvern Power Drain is not a power that lends itself to a lot of uses in the narrative, for obvious reasons. It actually came in handy here as a way to set up Jetman Killer's final fall.
- "Seven Force" was a mecha concept conceived by series creator Lewis Smith circa 2003-2004, originally intended for Grey Shrike. And that, my friends, is how Silver Raven ended up with it. Lewis' idea was a bit different, but the core was identical - a machine with seven distinctive modes all by itself. Though they aren't all utilized in this story, those modes are : Ichidai - Armor Mode (tank), Nidai - Miner Mode (drill vehicle), Sandai - Aqua Mode (submarine), Yondai - Gyro Mode (gyroscope), Godai - Jet Mode (jet), Rokudai - Rocket Mode (rocket), and Nanadai - Robo Mode (robot). Please note that those seven modes are in numerical order, only in Japanese (because it sounded cooler to me). The -dai in each mode name is a Japanese counter word used for counting vehicles or machines.
- Super God Icarus was the big secret mecha combination from the climax of ROJ Ep. 14. Not having it work due to the Jet Fighters being new models (which I established in passing in New ROJ Ep. 1) is just an example of me being difficult for the sake of dramatic tension.
- The climax to this battle includes a very deliberate callback to ROJ episode 2's finale between Green Wyvern and the members of Jetman, with Wyvern's musing that it led to nothing but more trouble.
- I think anyone with a passing idea of who "Itto Ogami" is probably will laugh at the assertion that it's an "old legend". He's the protagonist of Kazuo Koike and Goseki Kojima's manga series KOZURE OKAMI, better known in the West as LONE WOLF AND CUB. Now, whether the story is really a legend in the world of Jetman is open to interpretation. Gohan could certainly be stretching the truth just a mite.
As far as the bit about Jigoku-dani ("The Valley of Hell"), that is absolutely a real location in Japan. The idea to tie the two things together came from the amazing narration to the trailer for LIGHTNING SWORDS OF DEATH, the English dub of one of the KOZURE OKAMI films. I don't know if it takes place in the actual Jigoku-dani, but it's pretty vivid all the same.
- Kazuo Fujita is named for "Kazuo Fuji", Akira Takarada's astronaut character in GODZILLA VS. MONSTER ZERO (1965). The "JADC" is the Japan Astro Development Center (named for a similar facility in the 1967 film THE X FROM OUTER SPACE) and was previously mentioned in ROJ Ep. 13.
- "Ken-bo" is a nickname that actor Akira Kubo coined for fellow actor Kenji Sahara when he felt he had reached his level, as noted in the interview at http://www.historyvortex.org/InterviewAkiraKubo.html. It is translated as "boy Ken", so you might understand why Ken Tendo wouldn't necessarily be happy about it!
- The relationship between Etsuko and Kei is an interesting matter, and one I did not approach lightly. It was an idea that I first developed in passing way back in 2003, but I chose not to pursue it (beyond a comedy bit in ROJ Ep. 13 where I more or less dismissed it) because I did not feel I could do it justice at that time. Basically, I thought it would probably be tacky if I tried it.
So, why the obvious change of heart? Well, times change, people change, and after a lot of consideration, I felt I could do something positive with the idea and not have it look like a horrific misstep. Plus, Etsuko had to have disappeared for some reason, and it proved to be the perfect, somewhat shadowy catalyst without throwing even more darkness into the series than needed.
I suppose you could still look upon the way I've executed things as a bit...odd. My defense is that I don't look upon it as a girl/girl thing, but rather a person/person thing. Kei and Etsuko were two adults who made a decision and are dealing with the repercussions to their relationship. I'm quite proud of how it turned out, and personally have no regrets about including it as part of the series. Others may disagree, but I hope they can respect my reasoning.
© Christopher Elam.
Monday, May 14, 2012
New ROJ Episode 3 Notes
NEW RETURN OF JETMAN
"Some Say In Ice"
(Episode 3)
Production Notes
by Christopher Elam
© 2007-2012 Christopher Elam
New ROJ Episode 3 - "Some Say In Ice" was begun in October 2005, and wrapped principal writing on August 25, 2006. Quite a long stretch, no? All I can say is that I was suffering from a lot of personal issues for several of those months, and had a severe case of writer's block, too. But, it all eventually came together and I got the story finished before too much time had passed.
Unfortunately, the significant amount of time it took to finish this story made it somewhat unsatisfying to me. Oh, there are plenty of things about it that I really like. It just sort of disappointed me that it took so long and I couldn't come up with something truly impressive (to me). But then, this story's plot didn't really lend itself to opening up the action too much.
The idea of doing what amounted to a "locked room" type of story (i.e., one where the heroes are trapped in a building and must fight in a confined space) was one I had while writing the original ROJ series. In fact, it was the projected plot for "Caught In The Web", one of the stories which never happened. My main reason for not pursuing it then was that I had no idea if I could do it the way I wanted it. So dusting off the idea for this tale was a bit of a challenge. I didn't quite meet it, in my opinion, but it was exciting to give it a try.
- The title "Some Say In Ice" was derived from the poem Fire and Ice by Robert Frost. You should totally look it up if you've never read it.
- The opening sequence (and a portion of the next scene) were the only elements of this story actually written in 2005. All the rest was crafted in 2006, when I found the ability to resume working on it.
- The Antarctic base "Tazawa Station" was named after the character of Dr. Tazawa (played by Ryo Ikebe) from Toho's 1962 film GORATH. That film also featured a base at the South Pole.
- "Professor Sadao Maeda" is named after action film star Shinichi Chiba/Sonny Chiba. "Sadao Maeda" is, as it turns out, Chiba's real name.
- The fact that Ryu Tendo refers to Shinsei as "Gai" almost out of habit is a trait to reinforce the fact that it is hard for people who knew both of them to necessarily be able to separate them. Shinsei, on the other hand, is confident in his distinct identity.
- The exposition bit about the forcefield afforded me one last opportunity to drag out really terrible music jokes in relation to Funkyman. Their robot mentor "DJ Microbo" gets his name from the mash-up of "micro" + "robo", plus the (completely insane) idea that he is a disc jockey. The planet "Rokku" is a phonetic Japanese rendering of "Rock" and was inspired by Afrika Bambaataa's 1982 hit "Planet Rock". And the headquarters called "Funkytown"? This was a really obvious joke which eluded me when I wrote Episode 1, and you can thank Lewis Smith for calling that to my attention. You have probably heard the 1980 hit from Lipps Inc. entitled "Funkytown" or the 1987 cover of it by Pseudo Echo. If you haven't, you clearly have been hiding somewhere.
- I actually did a fair amount of research on Antarctica and included some facts to give authenticity to the setting.
- Hellvira Spitfire was another character originally conceived as "cannon fodder" for the ill-fated GMB/ROJ crossover. What's more, her name is a bit of a parody of the character names in Lewis' other big story project, SEVEN SPHERES LEGEND (It's worth noting that "Hellvira" is also the name of a character in the mid-1980s series SPIELBAN). Well, as it turned out, the character herself drifted away from that point of inspiration, and ended up incorporating elements from several different sources. That includes the "Deviarchy" backstory, which was largely made up as I went along.
- The Succubus Girls (and I really adore that name) were an attempt to give Hellvira some henchwomen. I'm not sure if the explanation for them makes sense or not, but that's something I try not to think about very much.
- Ying, with her black belt in hapkido, is an homage to 1970s female action star Mao Ying/Angela Mao. At one point, I had wanted all of the staff of Tazawa Station to be named after action film stars. This would have included a Dr. Ho Chung Dao (named for Bruce Li's real name). Ultimately, I abandoned the idea after Professor Maeda and Ying, because the rest of my attempts were not moving me. So instead...
- The other staff members of Tazawa Station - Narikawa, Ohira, Watanabe, Arai, and Ozaki - are named after the primary male actors of the show SPECTREMAN. Why? I have no idea. It just sounded good and felt right. Additonally, some of the stuff done with each character is due to the actor who is their namesake. Confused? I'll (try to) explain. Narikawa is named for Tetsuo Narikawa, who played Spectreman's human alter ego. This is why he is the first crewmember possessed. Watanabe is named for Takamitsu Watanabe, and he was apparently a skilled fighter. That is why Watanabe's martial arts skills are emphasized. Ohira the radio man is based on Toru Ohira, who played Chief Kurata. Toru Ohira is also known for his voicework (including, as it turns out, narrating a number of sentai series) and that is why the in-story Ohira never physically appears - he is only mentioned and we only hear his voice.
I'm not sure any of that makes any sense either, but that just shows you my thought process. Oh, and the other two actors were Kazuo Arai and Koji Ozaki. I didn't know anything useful about them, so they sort of got the short end of the stick.
- "Jet Cruiser" becomes "Jet Carrier", primarily because Lewis misremembered the name for a picture he was doing (more on that in a bit). Both were equally fine names so I changed things for this new series.
- Now, just to be clear, I mentioned New Zealand because it is on the way from Japan to Antarctica and I just liked the way the name looked in print. By sheer chance, a lot of Power Rangers stuff is/was filmed -- in New Zealand. I wasn't thinking of that at the time, honest.
- Poseidon Base was first mentioned in ROJ Ep. 12. It is, of course, a reference to "Center Neptune" in the BATTLE OF THE PLANETS series.
- a fifth grade class that solved crimes with a submarine - Ah, this. This is a direct reference to the 1980s series "Jaaman Tanteidan Marin gumi". It was created by Shotaro Ishinomori, and is by and large exactly the way I described Gohan's idea.
- The appearance of the pack of cigarettes is a callback to a minor subplot in the first ROJ series, in which Reiko's smoking habit was a point of discussion between her and Gohan. Reiko ended up quitting for good during the events of ROJ Ep. 12.
- Ken and Kei have always had something of an adversarial relationship. It had softened a little by the end of ROJ Ep. 14, but they will probably never be best buddies.
- Professor Maeda being a "shootfighting champion" (i.e., something like mixed martial arts) was a gag that only came to me because his name was based on that of Sonny Chiba. The fight sequence is a bit of a cheat, but I hope that it's funny enough that I can be excused.
- Ymir, the Frost Giant, is indeed a character from Norse mythology. He has a long and proud history of turning up in pop culture, most notably in Marvel Comics' THOR series.
- I don't know where I first encountered the word "simulacrum", but I am happy that I can say that I got to use it in a story and even the characters were confused by it.
- Guardian Icarus was a mecha picture that Lewis created on a lark, without any thought of me incorporating it into a story at all. I really liked it, enough that I decided that I would MAKE a spot for it. The "Double Vulcan" attack was my name, but the attack formation seemed obvious based on the design of the robot.
- Rie Aoi was Ryu Tendo's girlfriend in the first episode of JETMAN, but she didn't survive the end of the series. Her grave appeared fairly early in the run, though she was never buried there (it's complicated). Even her ghost turned up in the last two episodes of the show, though it was not made clear if it was real or just a hallucination Ryu was having. That is sort of the path I have followed with her appearance here. Though, of course, Mr. Hoshi turns up, too. That just makes things a bit more mysterious.
© Christopher Elam.
Monday, April 2, 2012
New ROJ Episode 2 Notes
NEW RETURN OF JETMAN
"Future Shock"
(Episode 2)
Production Notes
by Christopher Elam
© 2006-2012 Christopher Elam
New ROJ Episode 2 - "Future Shock" wrapped principal writing on September 8, 2005. Its debut was originally slated to be September 30, 2005, but it was delayed due to Hurricane Rita.
This particular episode was designed to ease the tension created by the end of the first installment, while still following through on the threads it started. It's not quite as over-the-top whimsical as some parts of Episode 1, but it is much more consistent overall. I count certain elements of this story to be some of my favorite writing ever, fiction or non-fiction.
If I made a miscalculation with this episode, it was in the realm of obscure references. There are lines and in-jokes that are deliberately obscure, but the point of this was that they were obscure and off-putting even to the characters in the story itself. This exercise was meant as something of a commentary on the concept of fandom as a whole, but it ended up just confusing some people. Can't win 'em all, I guess.
- Whether by accident or design (I'll never tell!), this opening sequence somewhat parallels a sequence with Supreme Commander Odagiri in ROJ Episode 1.
- "Hot milk" is Ryu Tendo's beverage of choice in the Jetman series. Yes, a very odd detail indeed.
- Captain Annie is Annie from the 1984-85 TV series UCHU KEIJI SHAIDER ("Space Sheriff Shaider"). Incidental details in her exchange with Ryu like "Ginga Patrol" and "space sheriffs" are also from the series and its predecessors GAVAN and SHARIVAN. My decision to use Annie originally stemmed from my unabashed admiration for Naomi Morinaga, the actress who played her. Of course, I didn't want to overdo it for the exact same reason. Annie as a captain in the Ginga Patrol was an idea I devised while planning a crossover story that never panned out.
- Setting part of the story in Hawaii was chiefly due to my desire to open the series up a bit globally. I chose Hawaii specifically because its devoted Japanese superhero fanbase made it seem like a natural.
- The Hawaii Convention Center is a real building in Honolulu, and its location relative to both Honolulu International Airport and Waikiki Beach is (as near as I can tell) as I described it. I did take some liberties with how the building itself is laid out, but I'm chalking that up to "artistic license".
- As we learned at the end of ROJ Episode 14, Gohan's "Tiger Burai" project became a successful manga and was on its way to becoming a hit TV series. The Tiger Burai Convention is a play off the assorted events in Hawaii devoted to the TV show JINZO NINGEN KIKAIDA.
- Turbo Burai, Cobra Burai, and Burai Eclipse are the names of three other "Burai" characters created by actual Tiger Burai creator Lewis Smith.
- Mike Minami and his sidekick Butch are very broad parodies of certain attitudes of American fans of Japanese superheroes. They're both composite characters, and not based on any one person.
- "The only downside is that people see my name tag and they want me to autograph Godzilla CDs..." - Michiru Oshima is the name of a Japanese composer, and among her credits are the Godzilla films GODZILLA VS. MEGAGUIRUS (2000), GODZILLA AGAINST MECHAGODZILLA (2002), and GODZILLA : TOKYO SOS (2003). When I was making up a full name for JETMAN's Michiru, I arbitrarily dubbed her "Michiru Oshima" without even remembering the composer of the same name. This reference is one of those very obscure ones that were meant to be funny whether you got the joke or not, but wound up just confusing a lot of people.
- Reiko Hayasaka was established at the end of ROJ Episode 14 as being first choice as singer for the theme to the TIGER BURAI TV series .
- "When I hear it, it makes me think of justice!" - a paraphrased quote from the mighty RZM of the late lamented HOH Forum.
- The cosplay ("costume play") and stage show action are both staples of the Japanese fantasy convention, both in Japan and abroad.
- "Dr. Komyoji had told me how much he'd enjoyed Hawaii..." - Again with a reference to KIKAIDA's popularity in Hawaii.
- Ah, Dirk Dixon and the multitude of retro futuristic details that inform his character. He was originally conceived as cannon fodder for the GUNMETAL BLACK/RETURN OF JETMAN story, but I decided I could salvage him when that project bit the dust. Conceptually, he is a Buck Rogers/Flash Gordon 1930s space hero type. However, I thought it would be interesting to use someone with that peculiar world view as an antagonist. His attitudes come across as extremely thickheaded and backwards by today's standards, but the exaggeration is not as great as it might seem. Times, as they say, change.
- The Clunk-O-Trons were a detail that was practically demanded by Paul "Igadevil" Sullivan (who even ended up naming them!), and I was more than happy to oblige. They owe their specific design traits of being silver, boxy, and wearing hats to the robots of the 1935 Gene Autry movie serial THE PHANTOM EMPIRE.
- "Uranus doesn't answer, sir." - This line was, I promise, uttered absolutely straight on the 1950s FLASH GORDON TV series that starred Steve Holland. My usage of it and the "Allied Solar System" name prove that, sometimes, I am still 12.
- "The Mongol Empire" - In the old Buck Rogers comics, his enemies were generic and wildly stereotypical Asians referred to as "Mongols". It made sense for Dirk to think of Jetman (and indeed, all Asian groups) in a similar way. It is slightly less than blatant racism on his part, and something that I felt was a bit risky to do. Still, Dirk is presented as a buffoon rather than someone who should be considered respectable in this context, so I think the inclusion works as commentary on the prejudices that were found quite casually in pop culture in the first half of the 20th Century.
- "There we can take on these Mongol dogs and make the world safe for Mom, apple pie, and the 48 states!" - This one of my favorite lines ever, and it also includes the subtle in-joke that Dirk is from a "future" where there are only 48 states in the United States. Obviously, Alaska and Hawaii didn't become states until the 1950s, which is beyond the reality of Dirk's character.
- According to Igadevil, a flowered Hawaiian shirt, shorts, and sandals are the required outfit for all Japanese superheroes when they travel to Hawaii.
- "Mr. Hoshi" is not just a random passerby, but a character whose mystery will be a thread throughout this series. Just in case you were, y'know, wondering about that.
- "Ah," he thought, "a jetpack on my back, a raygun in my hand, and the Mongols on the run. All I need now is a willowy brunette and an eccentric European scientist and this day will be perfect!" - Not only do I love this line too, but it's also somewhat accurate. Consider: if Buck Rogers = Flash Gordon, then Wilma Deering = Dale Arden and Dr. Huer = Dr. Zarkov. (Though I don't know if Huer was European, but you get the idea...)
- "Cho-Gin-Sin-Tie Jet Men" is a somewhat warped way to render the name phonetically, but might be your choice if you have no knowledge of Japanese.
- "I've never even been to Mongolia!" - It needed to be said.
- The rather skimpy explanation of how characters that shouldn't be able to understand each other somehow do is going to be the last word on the subject throughout the series. If pressed, I'd probably go into some convoluted pseudo-science involving the Omniversal Prism.
- "That would explain why he sounds just like Goro Naya!" - Oh man, this is another one that puzzled most people. That was the intention, actually, but several readers found it a bit distracting. Anyway, Naya is well-known voice actor in Japan. This particular gag refers specifically to the fact that he dubbed American actor Nick Adams in the Japanese versions of FRANKENSTEIN CONQUERS THE WORLD and MONSTER ZERO (both 1965). Gohan being Gohan, it made sense to me that someone like Dirk would have the voice of a familiar voice actor to him.
- The "Dynamite Tension Training Method" is a parody of "Dynamic Tension", the training method expounded by Charles Atlas in numerous magazine and comic book ads. The statement "Here's something I owe you!" is from those same ads.
- Dirk Dixon's giant robot rusting out was a bit of a cop-out as far as climaxes go, but I hope it's funny enough that I'll be forgiven.
© Christopher Elam.


